‘See that hill, the one hidden away, out of sight?
If you sit and wait, quiet-like, watching till night,
you might see something few have seen before,
a rare vision gleaned straight from old folk-lore.
A something hidden, something secret,
something I doubt you will ever forget.
‘Hush now, the sun has finally gone,
do you hear it, that faint wafting song?
Sit sit, do not move, else you might not see
this mystery, this beauty I know you want to be.
Look there! Do you see it, see the slight change?
Patience now, if you want to see it, you will manage.
‘Do you see them as they peer out,
searching for watchers they’re sure to be about?
The little creatures that shy from Man,
and search the grass around their little door,
though they freeze at all they think they saw.
‘Hush, hush. Ah! Here she comes from below
the minuscule little lady that runs this show.
The regally glowing Queen of the creatures hidden
beneath the surface of mortal woes to gladden
the heavy heart with joyful dreams
where nothing is what it seems.
‘She throws gleefully coloured balls
deep within her soil crafted halls,
where all the creatures come to dance
and hope to make a memorable entrance
before their delicate crystal Queen,
Ruler of the Realm of the Mortal Dream.
‘There, you see her now, her crystal form
glinting in the moonlight as though torn
from the mysteries of a half remembered dream,
a delicate nightmare that makes you want to scream?
Do you see her, the delicate crystal beauty of her,
and in seeing the ethereal beauty of her, do you fear her?
‘Now, now, don’t look at me like that
you know this is not fantasy, but fact.
Can you not feel the urge, feel the need
to turn and run with a blood-curdling scream?
Her fragile form holds an ice-cold heart,
you would know this, if you were smart.
‘See her subjects, as bright as bright can be
dancing joyous in coloured gaiety,
they twirl, spin and dance,
their performance’s sole purpose is to entrance
the unseen watcher beneath the full-moon
knowing that helpless, they will come out of hiding soon.
‘There, the magic is set, the trap is ready,
will you resist, though the urge to move is heady?
You want to join them, surely there is no harm,
not a movement, not a twitch that might cause alarm?
The twirling dance goes on and on
moving to the distant wafting song.
‘Your finger twitches, tapping in time with the soft beat
and before long, it is joined by both your feet.
Go on then, go and join them. Stand.
For after all, you are only a mortal Man.
So stand and go, yes you will,
and dance with them, into the grassy hill.’
Some faint sense twines through the spell
as the hill closed behind him, tolling a death-knell.
He turns and tries to run and flee
but the song snatches him up with glee
and gently sweeps clean his mind;
till there is not a thought to find.
‘Welcome to my Realm, the world beneath the surface,
a world filled with lies and endless grace.
You shall know, no more, no hate nor joy.
Well mortal, did you like my crystal decoy?
There, there, mortal, no need to cry
though you will never again see the sky.
‘Little mortal, you came to me willingly,
though I lured you with words, you see
there is none to blame but yourself,
but you will not grow old and placed on a shelf,
this age is yours to forever enjoy
while you spend eternity as my mortal toy.’
And in so hearing the mortal cried,
wept for the death longed for and denied.
Their fate sealed as they danced under the hill,
not knowing the Queen moved in for the kill.
Now they spend eternity at the feet of the Ice-Queen
1 comment:
Angela that's incredible. Did you write it? It's so difficult to believe.
There were some truly enchanting passages in this poem. Sometimes the rhyme was a little forced, or just pararhymed (pseudo rhyme, like "secret" and "forget"). Sometimes it clicked perfectly. You've created something astounding, and maintained for such impressive length! How fantastic, how majestic, how very ethereal. You've captured the heart of a very magical story. Bravo.
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